been studying some color theory and color temperature stuff, comments and critiques encouraged.
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been studying some color theory and color temperature stuff, comments and critiques encouraged.
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its make'n me hungry i think its great /question did the banna really make that orange hue on the very outter rim bottom if so do you know what caused it the source light mabe hmm? cool diggz
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oops, yeah, they're used to be a crumpled up orange wrapper underneath the plate, guess I failed to remove it. Will do that when I get home tonight. Thanks!Originally Posted by Grandmassa Mr. Spect
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real light is crazy and sometimes wierd things happen maby next time cheers on the piece
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Not much help I can offer. Just wanted to say this looks quite delicious.Really nice job.
The only nitpick I have is there feels like there should be a shadow in that area between the cantaloupe and the watermelon. Maybe I'm reading the angles of the melons incorrectly though and a pocket of light managed to slip in. Totally possible, but I'd double check the reference just to be sure.
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The values and form are real nice on this.
But I'm not sure if there's enough of color temperature shift between the light areas and the dark. And fruit tends to be somewhat translucent, which is a tough effect to get right, but you might get something out of looking at Karen O'Neil's paintings here: http://www.karenoneilpaintings.us.vu/
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Orange Hat, you're right, I didn't notice that one, will fix it up tonight.
Thanks for the link Kev, it was quite helpful, and I think you're right about the shift of color temperature, I'll see what I can push out of it tonight. An unfortunate oversight at the time I drew this, I didn't consider how much nicer it would be if the watermelon were on a bit more of a dynamic angle so we could see more of the sub-surface scatteringOH well, live and learn right?
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took me a little while to get back to this, but here's the update after the critiques
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good update. The yellow on the bananna is causing a bit of distraction, the hue is probably slightly off and could be a little more subtle. Also a tendancy to use white for your hightlights deadens the colour of everything else abit. Your elipse is slightly off in thetop right aswell
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