WTF!! Two days left to complete three people and a background.YAY for stupid....

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 01:22 PM

ughhh to lazy to edit the last thread on this CHOW, seeing as I changed almost everything. Ok here's the new idea. I need to make sure it's anatomically correct. I am trying to take the advice of several people into consideration on the depth issue. Fiddling around with the skins and textures hoping that they look more realistic. so any and all advice is welcome.

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 02:09 PM

thats looking great spaztastic i think a slight increase of the ribcage might help not neccisarly biger but more definition of its shape and get crackin on wippin this up lol

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 02:14 PM

yeah I am gonna do that with the ribcage... I still have to put a dress on her though... would you mind helping me with the Christmas future? I can't find a good position for him... I want him laying down kinda leaning on a wall. I just don't know how to go about getting it to look good...as you can see.

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 02:19 PM

why is he laying on the ground?

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 02:23 PM

i gotcha he is drunk i would put a bottlein a paper sack just out of his had the green stuff would be sprayin or spuin

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 02:33 PM

ahhaha got ya. see I am gonna use the candle snuff for his barf can... so gotta add that in still. now does his position look alright? or should I change it up a bit?

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 03:03 PM

try to think about how ribs and spine would bend with the shoulders against the wall how his elbo would also help sapport him where the wall and floor are located is very important because it affects what pose he is in sorry for the crappy po but i hope it helps

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 03:13 PM

http://www.qedata.se/bilder/historik..._fullgubbe.jpg http://pics.livejournal.com/chasethestars/pic/000yzcx5

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 04:02 PM

thanks for the PO it helps.

**PuppyKitten** · January 2nd, 2009, 05:38 PM

Spaz, I'm in the same boat. Only two days and I have to draw two of the characters still and all of the bg. Ugh ;_;

Like I said in the chow thread, those faces are hilarious. That paintover solves some issues, but another thing to look at is the girls front leg. It's pretty thick. The thigh is thicker than her waist and the calf is almost that thick. Since the rest of your painting is realism, I'd maybe work on that area a tad.

Otherwise, I really think it's looking great!

**Ayem** · January 2nd, 2009, 05:51 PM

Is the girl meant to be kicking that dude on the ground in the chin? If not, I suggest you more that foot away because it looks like she is.
Also, you've drawn the body at least mostly front on, but the leg that's lifted looks like it's from the side. I tried to put my leg befind my other one like that, and it doesn't work. Just a bit of foreshortening to make it look like the leg is going away from us rather than parallel to the viewer.

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 06:42 PM

ayem could you do a PO the ref I am using is really odd that way with the leg...

**GaussianRaider** · January 2nd, 2009, 07:00 PM

Alright, my friend...This is what I see.
The woman's neck placement looks a bit off, the breast are looks at a different inclination from the belly/hips area.
I really like the way you made the belly, protuding in a natural fashion.
The standing man's pose is a bit stiff, to me.
His feet are very big and his legs looks a bit long to me, as well.
There's something about the junction between the right deltoid and the trap.
Hope I can help...

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 07:26 PM

Originally Posted by GaussianRaider

Alright, my friend...This is what I see.
The woman's neck placement looks a bit off, the breast are looks at a different inclination from the belly/hips area.
I really like the way you made the belly, protuding in a natural fashion.
The standing man's pose is a bit stiff, to me.
His feet are very big and his legs looks a bit long to me, as well.
There's something about the junction between the right deltoid and the trap.
Hope I can help...

I am trying to find a ref for the mans pose...not working so far.. I am going to fix her neck and breasts right now. now with her breasts do they need to point more towards the man, as her stomach and hips are? or do they need to get a lift? I can fiddle around with his pose some to make it more natural. Thanks for all the help I really appreciate it.

**GaussianRaider** · January 2nd, 2009, 07:35 PM

Yes, I think they should point more toward the man ( think her whole ribcage looks slightly tilted, to me), I might be wrong and the pose might just be fooling me.
If you don't find reference why don't stretch your arm in that way and ponder on how your own shoulder muscles contract?

**Ayem** · January 2nd, 2009, 07:39 PM

Really shoddy, but hopefully it gets what I mean across.

**alesoun** · January 2nd, 2009, 07:47 PM

Check out that foot.
I dunno why I'm thinking Vegas feathers, but I just am! If it's any comfort, I haven't started colouring yet; and I'm working on analogue

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 08:04 PM

ayem I'll fix that foot right after I post the newest wip

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 08:08 PM

here's the latest wip

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 08:10 PM

I hoping Christmas presents body has more movement to it in this pose... Future will be holding the snuff in his arm as his barf can... I think I am gonna put in him red heart boxers... not sure yet. Ok so now to work on the foot and boobs. and well everything else too.

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 09:52 PM

so here is the update for the girl...

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 09:55 PM

I'm not gonna add to much detail to the torso cause she's gonna be wearing...something, I'm certain of that.

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 10:22 PM

you pretty much fix everything i was going to say you still might want to add abit of a twist in her leg manly in the knee it should be suttle / christmass passed is spot on cant wait to see them w/ cloths hope this helps

**Lisonia** · January 2nd, 2009, 10:25 PM

Must it paint the three Ghosts both ?
I prefer paint only one !
I will choice a beautiful girl figure to draw ghost fiture ! Hihi...

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 10:39 PM

Originally Posted by Grandmassa Mr. Spect

you pretty much fix everything i was going to say you still might want to add abit of a twist in her leg manly in the knee it should be suttle / christmass passed is spot on cant wait to see them w/ cloths hope this helps

yeah not quite sure how to get the whole twist in the knee thing... and I really need to work on the other two. Not to mention the background. ah what should I do for her hair, I am think like a trashy Brittany spears type wig, only really bright pink. to kinda give her that crazy drunk chick feel. what do you think?

**SMILEFACE** · January 2nd, 2009, 10:41 PM

i think thats great an if you run out of time you can through santa hats on em'

**spaztastic** · January 2nd, 2009, 10:53 PM

hahaha good idea...
or pink Brittany wigs

**spaztastic** · January 3rd, 2009, 12:27 AM

so any more Ideas?

**SMILEFACE** · January 3rd, 2009, 12:40 AM

yall got madd skills and pink Brittany wigs now just putem' together =)

**spaztastic** · January 3rd, 2009, 02:08 AM

so Christmas presents outfit sucks....I need to make more realistic and can't see straight right now to accomplish that. a prototype for her hair... I still need to add detail to the hands and feet. and not to mention Future does seem to have one right now. Pas is gonna get a toga, and this is getting a generic background...meaning splotches of color... so I hope the composition is better on this so far.. lemme know what you guys think..

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