You're brave to give your drawings as a present, I would overwork a drawing to death if i did that.
The bottom eye looks a little strange and the lips need more work. I love that little hand and sleeve! Its perfecto. Maybe flip the image both vertically and horizontally. Another tip to get the forms in the right place is using the Lasso tool and then warp, it feels like molding the image like clay.
You are defiantly a level 10 baby drawing sorceress!