Recent commissions

[Mirk0]

A two of my recent commissions...enjoy

[Jeff Lafferty]

Very cool.
Jeff

[Mirk0]

Thanks

[Cohen]

really cool! I love how there's realistic colors and shading but still the black outline. you can tell it's a drawing but it maintains realism. good style. keep it up. would love to see more.

[Jazz]

Hi!

Nice works! I like the colours you used overall. They're nice and bright, really stand out!

I did find a few issues:

The main issue is lighting. On the first picture, there is the light source in the girl's hand, and it should actually be illuminating more on her torso, the underside of her breasts (and top), and possibly more of her left leg since it's rising up at that angle. It might be worth your while to check out some references of women that are standing in similar angles with similar lighting, just to get an idea. I know it's tough to figure out lighting at times--can get pretty complex. o_o

It appears as to me that you have a 2D drawing with some 3D highlights--not so much for the the entire body all around, but for the shapes you see straight in front of you.

If you're looking to work more on the lighting aspect (and you haven't been there already), I suggest you go to the Peer Project v2 section: http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=76955

It'll be worthwhile, because I can see you have much potential for making some fantastic details!

One last pick, but that W on the girl's top looks more like it isn't part of her uniform. It's the angle--it doesn't go WITH the direction(s) that the top stretches on the girl's body.

Thanks for sharing your works! Know that I'm not getting you to change these, but just think about the issues for your future commissions and contemplate the ones you've been doing. Great work!

[Mirk0]

Thanks for the critics and the advice!

[Jazz]

You're welcome!