Dolls

[Micca]

This is my first time EVER doing a macabre piece... I wanted some helpful pointers and suggestions on how to make it really pop

The short story: The doll at the bottom center of the picture was actually a human. But the three dolls surrounding her turned her into a doll and plan to keep her there forever and ever as their plaything.



Please help

I took the web off and also the white 'fluff' on the tarantulas it make them look weird.

[Justice Von Brandt]

Hi

The spiderweb over the whole image is rather confusing. I first thought there were just lines all over the piece. I'd say take that out.

[Micca]

I changed it up a little, what do you think?