Mermaid

[Mecharissa]

Hi everyone,

I need some help with the face and any other things you think need to be worked on. I'm still in the beginning stages of this piece. But the face really throws me off, but I don't know why. Maybe the forehead? Oh and I also know her second hand isn't done but I can't get it right so it'll just be a blob for now.

[erebusnight]

The face is a tad bit too large for the rest of her body, as well as being off-perspective. It looks as if her features were placed on a flat plane instead of a 3D skull with eye cavities and whatnot.

[Mecharissa]

Thanks erebusnight, I tried to make the face smaller, and tried to make it look more rounded instead of just eyeballs slapped on. It was an attempt, does it look a little better?

[I_am_Nova]

Howdy!

I haven't been on this forum in ages, was just about to make my own critique request post but I couldn't help but notice your beautiful painting, and I think it's worth my 2 cents. Overlay this image ontop of your work in Photoshop and switch it on/off to see the changes I've made more clearly.