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    Help me improve!

    its been months since I have even picked up a wacom/photoshop.

    How can I improve? (besides practice =)
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    flatliner is offline For display purposes only Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
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    Its hard to say what to improve; its quite small. Is it photo collage or painted?

    One thing i would say is I think it would work better if the composition is symmetrical. It looks like it was, but cropped to much on one side. Is there any reason why its like that?
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    mix of Pshop and images w overlays and multiply. How can I improve on both?


    Offcenter, um, no reason, its not like it is final product or anything =)
    I like to work asymetrically.

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    flatliner is offline For display purposes only Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
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    As a whole I'd say it looks good , I'm not sure how you'd go about improving that I'm afraid. Just like I said before, it looks like everything been pushed to one side just so its not symmetrical, and i don't think it needs that. Or find a more interesting way to make it asymmetrical.
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