The eyes/eyebrows look like they're spaced and sized a bit oddly on the King in your Chow piece. I think you should keep working on it as it is, man. Looks sick.
HOW MANY PUSH-UPS CAN YOU DO?
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Industrial Design of the Week Leader Awesome work! Loving the pencils.
Robin Hood is looking great. A little bit of a crit, if I may be so bold- a bit of an echo of Wanna's crit earlier, actually. In the robin hood piece, other than the face, the values are quite similar and it's making Robin fade into the bg a bit.
Meh, but what do I know.....Great work!
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Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
This chow piece looks awesome. The composition is really good in my opinion. I wouldn't change anything about it.
Red-haired goblin
Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
Man the robin hood piece is awesome! Keep at it! Only thing I can see is the tilting of the torso/legs, which looks a bit strange. Anyway, I think we've got new winner for this week's CHOW.
Cheers!
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Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
really nice! love that portait in post 472, and the line work in the whole of that post. the robin hood piece is looking niice!
17 years old [Lilnebo]
As it is! As it is!
Crrazzzzy awesssommmmme, your work is going into the next level now
Keep it up!
On a self taught, artistic journey.
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
Amazing pencil rendering, great imagination!
Hello. jcpahl: Thanks a lot, glad you think so!
Jovian M: Yeah, I agree, I'll fix it, thanks!
Pixie Trick: I see what you mean, will try to do something about it, thanks!
Rushlord: Thanks, we'll see about it. :p
Abrodos: I noticed the leg/torso area as well, looks too short or out of perspective, not sure. Thanks, but I really doubt the winning part, hehe.
Raffix: Thanks man!
Lilnebo: Thanks, let's hope so, I guess, haha.
JustinBeckett: Thanks man, glad you appreciate it!
Uhmmm, gestures?
Hello. Disclaimer: I didn't get bumped when I updated!
(Sorry for the double post)
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Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Hello. Jovian M: Yup, thanks. :p
Finished the Robin Hood ChoW, not too sure if I'm happy about it, though. Oh well.
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Level 3 Gladiator: Catervarii
Beautiful and imaginative work. I'd love to see more colors, and perhaps different colored ink!
17 years old [Lilnebo]
Yes, It's true love
Next level visual shitttt!
I'm gonna marry you
Keep on killing (not literally please, my husband can't be in jail...)
the funky homo sapien
Level 9 Gladiator: Hoplomachi
Super sweet stuff man! Those figures are tasty!
Perfectly imperfect
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
mhhh.. I'll keep on eye on you, mighty warrior of the pencil.
Espen Olsen Sætervik
Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
fy faan.
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Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
I really like your robin hood, but for some reason I think it might look better with a little more space between the head and Robin. Maybe just me.
Keep it up
Chris
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giving up's way harder than trying
Level 9 Gladiator: Hoplomachi
Your stuff keeps getting better, and the concepts / compositions are really awesome. Keep making awesome pieces and don't forget to keep doing studies. I appreciate your advice on my sketchbook, and my main critique on your robin hood pieces would be to make the branches of the trees in the left harder and more varied in size and see what that looks like. Keep rockin
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Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
mate the gestures are very good and inspiring
Btw the last piece went really nice.Put more work on the next one, i mean more details in the focal areas.You already did but i think it needs some more work, and i am sure the next one will be even better.Also , maybe break the hard edges in the far background.
Really nice work, keep it up!!!
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Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
Damn man, you're good. I really do hope you go to art school, you can go very far.
On a self taught, artistic journey.
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
Wooowww, look at those latest figures, love them, keep these up!!!
I disagree! PENIS! TACO! CHEWBACCA!
Level 8 Gladiator: Thracian
hey man
love the girls from imagination
i wanted to say the robin hood piece is all right.
you put a butt load of love into the face and it shows but the rest of the piece is bland and undefined you know what i mean. try moving around the canvas a little more instead of rendering the crap out of something ya know
cya bro
Hello. Oblivia Enna: Thanks, there's definitely more colour coming!
lilnebo: Haha!
alexson: Thanks mister!
DefiledVisions: I thank Thee sincerely, Dragonmaster.
Meon: Takker og bukker.
Hive_MinD: Yeah, could've done that part differently, or completely left out the head - not sure though. Thanks!
jeremyg0rdon: Thanks man! I didn't really give the forest a lot of thought, but I agree, it was done poorly, should've given it some more love. ;p
kingkostas & hunchback: You point out the same thing about the focal areas and detail all around, and you're both right. The picture should've gotten more polish overall. Thanks!
Flanagan: Thanks!
JustinBeckett: Thanks a lot man!
Stuff from the past couple of weeks. Hope you like it!
SnobbyOo
Level 9 Gladiator: Hoplomachi
i like them
Stylus Monkey
Level 13 Gladiator: Retiarius
Absolutely love your studies and sketching buddy, wonderful balance, line efficiency and cleanliness and form!
Cheers, Darren
Perfectly imperfect
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
Haha that's some great pencils! I'll borrow some of your mastery.gif ";)")
really though, keep it up! btw, do you live close to Oslo?
Sketcheroo
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
oh man oh man! Love love LOVE your stuff! The robin hood chow is fucking brilliant.
As for sketching, just keep it up, looke totaly great.
Thanks for stoping by my dried out sp too. ^^
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Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
yuor pencils are really interesting! I like a lot...also the palette in Robin H is great!
giving up's way harder than trying
Level 9 Gladiator: Hoplomachi
Your rendering in these latest sketches is really nice, and the monster with the huge upper body is gnarly; great work. Did you ever do Loomis, Bridgman, Vilppu, etc? Your anatomy is really accurate.
Just what the doctor ordered.
Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
i love your figurative work
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