Creepy SA sketch.

[JackSparrow]

this is a SA (service assistant ) sketch I did on my break at work it was my base for my finished pic but I like the original to so here it is

Creepy SA



took me about 5 min for the pencils and about 2-5 min inking after I went over my pencils wih a blue marker so about 12-18 min tops

crits welcome :evilbat:

[soul8o8]

..ok the right hand obviously looks a bit screwed up

i think the shading lines on the cap's shade and the shading lines on the shirt is really yhe only thing that looks out of place. i think these areas should use the same style of shading lines as the rest of the drawing.. maybe. im not sure

[die_with_honor]

spend more time on your drawing this isnt to good

[JackSparrow]

Thats why its a sketch, check out my site. btw i c you talk alot do you draw at all? if not quit with the advice :eek: