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    Dark Army

    I rarely finish things, so I'm quite pleased with myself today.

    I started this for Art Crusade but ran out of time and posted a WIP instead.
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    the color is really nice!but the enviroment I think you need paint more detail,man!awesome works!
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    pretty sweet, reminds me of a pic by Jason Chan from the space opera contest on cgtalk ( i think it was jason atleast lol)

    the arms on the main figure is bugging me though, they look a littel short and wonky.
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    the center character's arms are extremely confusing man

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    Thanks for the comments.

    What's wrong with the arms? They appear short because of foreshortening + the angle, but it should be anatomically sound.

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    You may have intended the arms to be foreshortened, but unfortunately they're not coming across that way - so, they look too short.

    You need to make the foreshortening more obvious, or just have him holding his arms out wide (and lengthen them).
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    im going to have to say it looks like cartoon arms with gigantic hands. the foreshortening wasn't succesfull unfortunately

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