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    Darwin's Diary

    welcome
    c&c
    thank u
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    try logo design

    the first edition
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    hi guard

    i have a dream
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    Goos start here, post some more stuff for comments - the 1st lady and armoured guys is nice - the girl's head is a bit off center though. Armour guy is a bit skew too

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    Quote Originally Posted by kidult View Post
    Goos start here, post some more stuff for comments - the 1st lady and armoured guys is nice - the girl's head is a bit off center though. Armour guy is a bit skew too
    K, thank u for your advice, my first critic.
    I will upgrade the female but let the guard pass(smile), I am lazy.

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    Good start man! Last post the guys legs look a bit off seems like they could be brought in a bit. When it comes to your reality slips logo i like your third version. Only C&C i have to that would be tighten up the spacing in the letters for Reality so the silhouette could be a bit more promenet and extend the tail of the p to extend a bit lower. Then slide the to do list over on the other side of the p would take it to the next level IMHO.

    Post Moar! I wanna see the progress of you ideas and work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaffinated View Post
    Good start man! Last post the guys legs look a bit off seems like they could be brought in a bit. When it comes to your reality slips logo i like your third version. Only C&C i have to that would be tighten up the spacing in the letters for Reality so the silhouette could be a bit more promenet and extend the tail of the p to extend a bit lower. Then slide the to do list over on the other side of the p would take it to the next level IMHO.

    Post Moar! I wanna see the progress of you ideas and work!

    Cheers
    Ka thank u so much
    i will take your advice
    change those things is tough for me(laugh)
    but i will do that to practise my patience
    thanks again
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    Teenage Taoist

    teenage taoist,
    he is a killer at day and a thief at night, works for a secret organization.
    i called this set a faquir suit (for daywork),
    i design it for a job interview a month ago, actually i am not intrested in ancient Chinese subject, but i know sometime u have to do something for living and i am happy that i start enjoy drawing the ancient subjects now.
    welcome c&C
    thanks.
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    Nice work on this last one

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    2010 new beginning

    back here find this thread and keep on
    start with the basic
    study muscles
    have a pic for reference and focus on structrue
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