zauselbart's sketchbook (stop whining, start working)

**Zauselbart** · March 11th, 2008, 03:56 PM

hi,

i'm 20 and like to draw^^

Any critics and comments are greatly appreciated.
Best

**Maledict** · March 11th, 2008, 04:08 PM

Heya zauselbart, welcome to CA.org.

I like the figure drawing of the fat lady, looks really nice, very good hatchet shading.

The potrait of the lady is a bit off though, I did a quick paint over to show you where it's going wrong.

But you're doing great so far

Have you just started learning to draw?.

I'm also 20 as well, nice to finally meet someone the same age

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**Zauselbart** · March 11th, 2008, 05:29 PM

mh i draw seriously about 7 month berfore that i did just a few picture in the year

thanks for the advice

ref leonardo da vinci

**Zauselbart** · March 12th, 2008, 03:56 AM

head studies

all with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 12th, 2008, 01:27 PM

more stuff

all with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 12th, 2008, 05:00 PM

more studies^^

all with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 13th, 2008, 05:33 PM

some life drawings und two without ref

**Xerotin** · March 13th, 2008, 05:53 PM

Nice drawings man. Keep it up

**Zauselbart** · March 14th, 2008, 03:27 AM

Xerotin: thanks

more stuff with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 14th, 2008, 04:00 PM

new and old stuff

**Zauselbart** · March 15th, 2008, 08:44 AM

life drawing

**Zauselbart** · March 15th, 2008, 03:40 PM

more stuff^^

**Zauselbart** · March 16th, 2008, 10:59 AM

some studies

**Zauselbart** · March 17th, 2008, 12:14 PM

painting with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 19th, 2008, 02:38 PM

the lady without ref the horse with ref

**Zauselbart** · March 20th, 2008, 05:48 AM

another painting

**Zauselbart** · March 20th, 2008, 02:35 PM

studie

**Leysan** · March 20th, 2008, 03:43 PM

Hi, nice start

Maybe you could try to to bring more contrast/values into your drawings and try to take better photos. I like that still life with bottle.

**Zauselbart** · March 24th, 2008, 09:18 AM

@Leysan thanks for your comment i will try it

another painting - very bad^^

**Zauselbart** · May 1st, 2008, 06:50 AM

more pictures

**Dannelf** · May 1st, 2008, 11:33 AM

Hi there! you've got alot of interesting stuff here, like the anatomystudies!

It would be nice with more head-studies! the eyes in the pictures are often not in proportion to each other!
Nothing more to crit! Just keep it up!

**Zauselbart** · May 3rd, 2008, 05:13 AM

@dannelf: yes the eyes are very difficult i work on it - thanks for the advice

**Zauselbart** · May 11th, 2008, 01:36 PM

more stuff

**Zauselbart** · May 27th, 2008, 01:42 PM

new stuff

**Zauselbart** · June 1st, 2008, 05:27 AM

more stuff

**Zauselbart** · June 10th, 2008, 12:34 PM

new stuff

**Zauselbart** · June 18th, 2008, 03:01 PM

mmm new stuff

**Zauselbart** · July 19th, 2008, 11:11 AM

new stuff

**Zauselbart** · July 27th, 2008, 06:01 AM

a new day

**Zauselbart** · April 28th, 2009, 09:30 AM

new picture

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