I found it very useful to post in "works in progress" forum..
I hope you will help me again.. this time with a very important presonal image for someone, who I very like...
here a wip
wow. i love this.
i dt hav anything to say right now since its a pretty good wip... dunno... sorry no cc keep at it!
going for more of monochrome feel? i like the colors of the first post a lot more, i think you shd stick to them...
also, watch the strokes on your background trees, specifically that one on the right...
imo the purple actually brightens up the piece and furthers itself from that kind of atmo
the first one is much prettier
and I just love both
This is coming along!
I would significantly decrease the saturation of the lamp. It's so bright it's distracting and it's effects on the surrounding environment don't reflect it as being that bright.
Transversely, I would increase the saturation of the girls wings and use that light to show more detail in the shadows on her left side. She is the focal point and i wish I could see more of her details.
...my humble and uneducated opinion.
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