Character Creation: my story character in grayscale, colored, multiposes

[dreamflyer]

In order from 1-4 are titled as followed:
1. Noctiluna in Grayscale
2. Noctiluna in Color
3. Noctiluna Color Wheel Poses
4. Noctiluna Elemental Forms

Noctiluna is my main character for my series of short stories.
BLessed be,
LG Dreamflyer

[Pesmerga_2501]

Hmm...well I think your heading in a strong direction ^^ Your ideas are very unique.

I think your only downsides are the photo quality and simple technical drawing.If you have a sexy elemental female lead i think you should really play that up. Her poses are very boxy and rigid. Good news is the more and more you study the better and better you will get. I would say look at some old master drawings of women (I like Raphael personally because I think his overlapping of forms is sexy ), and see how they handle things. From there you can build a better understanding of how things can be done. Great work and I look forward to see more form you.

[dreamflyer]

thanks for your insight

[Luz]

you need better practice on your anatomy, try looknig on google, or going to a bookstore it will greatly help you