rich i think wit the last one the negatives look very opaque and gouachey? in a darkroom the redlight is so overpowering i feel that either the negative would be saturated with the red (and seem a bit more transparent) or for illustrative sake be more of the complementary green? and to be so bright they would need another lightsource on them, presumably a red light being in the darkroom atmosphere. it is a tough pickle! by themselves they are beautifully done though!
btw i forgot to introduce meself, my name is mr hardass nitpick, how do you do?
i did some sloppy rough mollyhogging of your piece to show a quickens of what i mean...