twoeggshuffle - July 23 update

[kaktuzlime]

Damn mate, you´ve grown immensely! Neat designs, nice rendering. Good looking zombie, feels very zombie When are you going to treat us with an update?

[Kaffinated]

Awesome usage of chainsaws in your designs mate! Now with including the time spent in the Critique center can we see some more posts!!

[Daniel Andrews]

I like the WIP pieces, helps me see a different process in how to go about my own crap.
Love the character man, They already look like they should be in a video game.

[Interceptor]

Lol. No that thing Steak posted is'nt me... atleast I don't think so. I dunno, things get crazy at those workshops. Thanks for the crist and comments y'all.

a handful of more characters.

[Daniel Andrews]

Nice update. Group them all together for better viewing
The Devil chick doesnt look as Cracked out as what I though you wanted but its a great character. I like the Texture & Design on the sword in her hand. the hilt is simplistic but appealing design.
!!She Stole my belt!!

[[void]]

Nice update loren. The one thing thats bothering me is the outline on the chin aswell as on some other flesh areas, I feel its flattening them a bit. Also don't be scared to get some more colour variantion in there!

Good work, see you soon lovebunny!

[D@niel]

Wow, those are some amazing characters!!

[DANKA]

Very nice Characters! Love the last girl! nice!

[HunterKiller_]

Finally an update. Great characters.

The only crit I have is that the devil girl's tummy is very flat.

[Jaytea]

Agreed with everyone else! Great character renders, haha I particularly like the mage~

Just a small crit, on this one, how her right leg is skewed to the side; not quite straight. Other than that, this is fantastic! :]

[hp]

i think if you added some more dramatic lighting to the characters it would help. otherwise they look really awesome! cool designs.

[Pseudocognition]

I LOVE your costume designs. There is so much variety, and I love the asymmetrical aspects. Want moarrrr

[monotony]

ow I have been following your posts on the gorillablog but haven't seen your sketchbook before.
love all the characterdesigns you pull outa your sleeve. especially flying chainsawgirl is awesome. and the last batch has some great colors.
the left hand of the last character looks weird to me but that's all I could nitpick about them.
some more of your pencilsketches would be cool to see.
great work!

[wookiedabo]

your painting looks so confident and professional, really sells your designs. lovely stuff.

[Daniel Andrews]

I love this characters color choices!!
Its to bad you didn't have much fun with the character. His pose and expression make him seem unimpressed but the painting its self is still pretty good.
There is a bit of dark outline. Its not really a flaw as fair as im concerned, it just makes me curious as to how well that would allow a character to be inserted into a Background.
Glad to see more work man, love the characters.

[BohemianChaos]

I just found this thread, and realized that despite meeting you in San Fran in 06, I don't think I had ever seen any of your work. I like the variety of your characters, and your style is distinct.. a good thing. Maybe work on the dynamism of your poses a little more? I'd love to see more use of texture as well. Keep it up!

[Ashab]

great colour and confidence in your work, keep it up

[Hive_minD]

You have some gorgeous characters going on here. I especially like the females.

Chris

[Interceptor]

Dan - Yeah you're right, it's nto all that bad, hey? I guess i'll just have to do it with another character, because I think I like her better this way, anyways. thanks for the comment, see you at the sketch group!
Adam - Yeah, I'm really having some issues with that area. Thanks for the help, sweetie pie.
D@niel - Hey thanks, mate!
DANKS - Thanks! I kinda like her, too!
Shalite - Thanks for the crit! I see these people of asian girls sometimes and thier legs can do some wacky things, but it does'nt really look right in the painting, huh? Cheers!
Emily - Thansk for the advice, old buddy!
Psuedocognition - That means alot to me! hehe, assymetry is what I'm all about, ever since I saw LL cool J walking around with one pant leg rooled up, maybe? hehe
monotony Oh, wow, I'm amazed you can remember me from GorillaArtfare, there's too many guys out there that totally outclass me. I feel kinda special right now More chainsaw girl coming soon. Hopefully a ton of sketches when I get a new scanner, too.
wookiedabo - Wow, what a compliment! Can't thank you enough!
Dan (again ) - Yeah, the outline is killing me. Next batch that's what I really want to focus on getting rid of.
Bohemian Chaos Yeah, you were in the neighbouring dorm, right? I'm getting a bit tired of the simple poses also. there's gonna be more of these though, so I'm trying to do alot of sketching with mroe unique poses
Ashab - Thank you, monsieur!
Hive Mind - Fantasy females are my favorite! hehe. Thanks!




Hey everyone.
Thanks for the great crits and comments.

This was a collab with Hurricane. I painted over a sketch he gave me.


Sketch of a knight from Eklipse, Garland. Ive gotta study up on armor design.


This is the sketch I gave to Hurricane to paint, very very loose. But I do like the idea, I bet he'll make it turn out great!


JUst a sloppy doodle of Gladys using magic, Gatery is amazed.

[JaneM]

I really like your character designs! My favourite is the furry red haired guy with long ears. His pose is dynamic, and the design looks good.

[Daniel Andrews]

Hey man!
The Collab images looks great, the flowers on the dress are a nice touch. That bird kicks ass.
Not sure if my judgment is off today but it looks like you ,minimized up the dark outline around the knight. Nicely done & I still love his colors
A band of females who play naked in wet...in water. This is a hell of a concept
You say this is a bit rough but it still shows a cool little moment.
Wonderful work man!

[Gloominati]

cool stuff in here man! I really like the way you put the rendering down, simple but tight and effective

[Jason Scanlon]

yes, i agree, your rendering seems very efficient.

[Mischeviouslittleelf]

Wow, good solid stuff here. I think that there are things that can be improved on, but for now, I just wanna see you do more more more. I love the designs, I love the gestures, I love the entire feel of this, so work it through, and then get back to some studies

-E

[hp]

it looks like you're gettin a lot better in terms of lighting. only crit is the sketch you gave hurri, the bodies seem a bit short.

[Iddi]

I really enjoy your character designs and how you use really saturated colors, which could be a bad thing, but you pull it off very well

[wookiedabo]

cool stuff man, still loving the colours. nice work.

[DanielC]

Good work loren

[Interceptor]

Xiao Niao.
She's a Captain of a ship called the Flock in Charity's fleet.
This girl is kind of a bad-ass though, she really hates Charity, and is just waiting for the right time to start a mutiny. Even the villains have villains



Thanks everyone, for crits and comments!
-L

[Daniel Andrews]

Nice result man. The patterns on the out fit definitely give the overall costume more interest as opposed to a single area. The staff disappears a bit before if goes behind the torso, perhaps the material of the clothing is not reading well to me.
I like that subtle sex appeal using the thigh hip connection. Might distract her opponents
Shweet work man.