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    for a friend

    it's done in India Ink!


    i'd like to know some things i could have done better! any suggestions??? i referenced from a comic picture of nightcrawler (x-men)
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    deep_in_food is offline art n00b since Feb, 2007 Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
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    It will help to post a slightly larger picture. The picture will look more dramatic if the style of lighting of the background matches the style of lighting of the figure. It looks like as if the figure is climbing at night time, while the background suggests that it's day time instead
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    i agree with deep_in_food the picture is a little too small. however, from what i can see it looks awsome!

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    The lighting on the fingers is pretty cool. The lighting on the face could have used the same treatment. You shoulda checked your own face out in the mirror with the same lighting and you'd see all the interesting form that you've fudged on the face.

    Overall a nice piece.
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