Tickling Emily

**Duchess** · September 3rd, 2003, 09:46 PM

I know, I know I have to work on the hands, arms
but I don't have a lightbox to fix em and my eraser's worn
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**Duchess** · September 3rd, 2003, 09:50 PM

Now that I see it up here, I see more booboos I took a long test in school today and lots of housework, I'm a lil sluggish. Not to mention looking at the monitor Fucks up my eyes :eek: ooh Pardon my language

**Sammy** · September 4th, 2003, 05:16 AM

yea, when images are scanned and enlarged onto a monitor that's perfectly manufactured pixel per pixel, the booboos tend to stick out...

Keep sketching away, but I think you should get looser with your pencil... block in simple shapes and be really really sloppy... this will help you get your probortions just right

once you get the proportions you can go back in and shade it as a sketch.. or you can trace it for a finished piece..

**shyst** · September 4th, 2003, 05:27 AM

duchess.. did you say you wrote poetry?? did you ever chat online? like WBS???

Yeah sammys right ..take this sketch and trace it with another paper.. also to help with your shading trace that also... heck also trace just to trace it will help with your forms....

You sure Emily didn't draw this?????

SHYST
BROOKLYN-OK

kicking like shinobi- hitt'em with da force like obi-

**Chromo48** · September 4th, 2003, 06:46 AM

I think you just need to try and focus more on forms and shapes. It can be exhausting at times, but the payoff is worth it. Also what Sammy said, get looser and more free with your hand. I'd use a lighter pencil to do the construction then go over it with a softer lead to define everything. Looks like you might be pressing really hard or using a soft lead.

Keep at it!