Fayle's first Sketchbook!

[Fayle]

Hi,

this is my first post here.

I'm trying to improve my drawing skills to apply for a university of art and design in Germany next year.

I'll try to improve my skills every day, so you'll see hopefully a lot of better work in the next weeks.

So please write what you think about it!

[FlyingFins]

The first image, the fruit is very good, i really like it.

I think that a lot could be done to the cat, your clean style is very nice but the cat lacks depth, I think that you need a stronger light source for the Cat, this would help you define for forms of the cat more (for example, a light coming from the left or right, so the shadows and forms of the cat would be easily definable )

i hope that makes some sense. i like your pencil work as well.

[Fayle]

Hi there,
thank you for your critique.
I agree with you... I'll try to improve the light next time.
I'm currently in a head painting/drawing course, so here are some pics:


last week:





this week:
the girl took about 20 minutes, the boy 10 minutes



nature sketch:




C&C are welcome!

[ajvenema]

yo dude! nice start u have there... how long have u been drawing now?
its good to see someone here with the same goal as me, good luck with gettign into college

[Fayle]

Hi there,

@ ajvenema: I'm drawing now seriously since half a year, but it has been my hobby since I was able to do it . Good luck for your goal, too!

I've some new to show for you

today it was my third head-drawing lesson, and here are my results:

about 2x15min:





about 10 min:




animal-scull drawing:




Please C&C

[Fayle]

Hi!

here are my newest 2 Watercolor Pictures


Please write what you think about it!

[jompen]

I love them, i havnt draw for so long so its hard for me to give any good advices but to say it´s wonderful and draw more , more and more .

[ramoraz]

i love your stuffs mate, altho it seems as if we have a common problem wich is with giving stuffs the right texture to enhanse the curves and forms of something, like FlyingFins alrdy mentioned. i think it is extremely hard to see the shades in my head and then applicate em in a natural way.. but as they say practise makes perfect, atleast i hope so.

love your watercolor work mate, keep the good work up

[Fayle]

Thanks for your comments!

@ramoraz: I agree ....I think the only way to improve this is working hard on it

[Fayle]

New pictures

Please C&C

Watercolor:




10 minutes for each guy:

[JRStagg]

singular lines could realy help you i think, overall a good sketch book some great work in here, anatomy is a little off in some areas but not 100% so you could iron that out with a fiew studies on your weak areas. i'll leave you to spot them so you can see for your self where and what you need to do!

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Great work keep it up! i can see your getting to the standard you need to be with work !

[Fayle]

Hi there!

Thanks for your critique JRStagg
I had not so much time for drawing in the last days but here is my newest work!

About 5-15 minutes for each one:









Please C&C

[Fayle]

Hi,
here are some new pics after some stressful weeks!

All about 10-15 minutes in head drawing class:











Please C&C

Cheers Fayle

[Fayle]

Hi!
here some new stuff I did yesterday

[Fayle]

Hi there,
at the moment I'm trying to get better in digital painting...not so easy

[Fayle]

Hi, some new sb scans
Please C&C
Cheers Fayle

[Fayle]

Hi there,

some new digi-paintings after a longer break.
Please feel free to tell me your opinion