(WIP) Young Child.

**Xiozen** · September 16th, 2007, 08:52 PM

Hello conceptart.org community! I am currently a junior in highschool and am attempting to further my artistic skills as I hope to one day major in a form of artistic field. I randomly started sketching this little kid tonight and I really only spent maybe 15-20 minutes on it so I have a lot to improve but I figure I would post it here and get some feedback. The components I want to work on the most include the eyes, the hair, and the bow(as well as how it rests in the hair realistically speaking). Any feedback is welcome! Thanks in advance!

PS: I'm hoping the image I attempted to put on here works.

**Xiozen** · September 16th, 2007, 10:35 PM

Edit: added primary coloring, more to come...

Ellingsworth · September 16th, 2007, 10:36 PM

Nothing's showing up for me, dude.

**Xiozen** · September 16th, 2007, 10:40 PM

So work further and then post when it's nearly finished for crits?

Ellingsworth · September 16th, 2007, 10:43 PM

Originally Posted by Xiozen

So work further and then post when it's nearly finished for crits?

?

I just can't see the image, try to re-upload it, use the paper clip icon in the advanced post options.

**velcon** · September 16th, 2007, 11:10 PM

I don't really like it...

Way too bubble cheeked for me...

**ariyumei** · September 17th, 2007, 12:41 AM

I see it has a kind of "style" here.
I was just about to say that the eyes were too big, but in the second picture, you adjusted that.
I don't know what else to say...maybe a little bit more shading in the second picture?

**Xiozen** · September 17th, 2007, 04:24 PM

As far as the "bubble" cheeks are concerned, that was the look I was going for. Sort of cherubim-ish. And yeah, Ariyumei, I plan to further render the second image to make it look a little more realistic while keeping that same style.