Iron Wurkz

**IRON-MAN-429** · May 22nd, 2008, 01:01 AM

I havn't been here for a while, so I bring new shit. Anyways, I am horribly out of practice and in dire need of critiques to improve my work.

**IRON-MAN-429** · May 23rd, 2008, 04:10 PM

two sketches for today.

**IRON-MAN-429** · May 25th, 2008, 03:19 PM

two more, decided to color the Shroomurai. I should have these finished up tomorrow.

**IRON-MAN-429** · May 27th, 2008, 12:41 AM

Was trying to learn to use textures. What do you guys think?

**IRON-MAN-429** · May 29th, 2008, 02:33 AM

lagging in art here, so here is old crap from me. Ill try to scan in some art studies tomorrow.

**Sublimus** · May 29th, 2008, 08:56 AM

Thanks for stopping by my thread!

Looks like you have a good start here too. A few pointers though.

Try and use the biggest brush you can. For example, your strokes in the black and white texture pic are distracting, and scratchy (im talking about the one without the texture) also in that pic, if your going to let photoshop render clouds for you try and hide it a bit. ('chuck, mate' has a nice cloud brush he put up for dl in his sketchbook).

In the latest pic, dont use black for shadows!!!!!! That's just not the way it really is in real life.

That darkstorm wip above it is looking nice though! Probably the best thing in here so far.

Keep up the work man!