Punkish Pachyderm

[Smeagol71]

Long time no post for me...man people just keep raising the bar on this board! Bravo to all for keeping your noses to the grindstone.

[Rascar Capac]

nice work

-Just a suggestion - you could do some really cool stuff with the trunk and create some nice dyanmic lines with it - something to think about.
-Also, is he supposed to be like an accordian in the middle? that would be something interesting to play with too
-Tone down the 2 bright lights at the bottom - too distracting. In fact - losing the whole bottom to darkness with some light here and there catching the details of the machinery through the smoke would be nice and add to the mood.

[Ellingsworth]

Haha Very funny man, I love it. Agree with the above critiques, also maybe define some of the smoke more, just a suggestion.