Workflow - Mage

[Einhase]

Hi all,

been reading through this forum for a while but never posted something

This is a mage i am workin on for a pen and paper rpg, as you can see its far from being finished.

The hands and boots give me headages and I am also afraid of working out the face

Any c&c is much appreciated

[throtailer]

There i think shouldnt be so much muscles, course cloth is on them. And that cloth on chest should be more flat, it looks like there's water in it or smt

[Einhase]

thanks throtailer, I think you are right. Not sure how to solve the bubble problem, I think i need to add more folds on the chest.

[throtailer]

Try to erase some shade and remove or just shrink borders. And maybe try to add wrinkles