Odd World

**Bob.Razowsky** · August 22nd, 2005, 07:01 PM

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**Bob.Razowsky** · August 23rd, 2005, 05:46 PM

**NightVision** · August 23rd, 2005, 11:53 PM

Not bad ! some I like, some I like less ... I wanna see some more, cause I'm not sure what to C&C

What do you mean in your first post ... a copy is not drawing ?? Not sure if that's what you mean ? Anyway, I like that pic, and as long as you credit your source, you can put it in here ... copying is a good way of learning ! Even tracing can be helpful sometimes, to work out a specific problem (although I wouldn't include a tracing in my sketchbook).

**Bob.Razowsky** · August 30th, 2005, 07:37 PM

**armando** · August 30th, 2005, 09:27 PM

The first posts are kinda interesting, I don't really care for the wind up gladiators though. Before attempting shadows you should get a hang of perspective first, "Perspective Made Easy" by Ernest Norling is good. I don't know if you used reference in the first one, the mirror image, but the way you overlapped the lines is pretty good. For help on anatomy check out "Figure Drawing" by R.G. Hatton. Another thing to work on is your use of value, the glass doesn't look like glass because you've used a dark outline around it, and there isn't any reflection or anything on it. "Drawing Realistic Textures in Pencil" by J.D. Hillberry can help you with this. Of course don't forget to check all the different artist's on this sight. You've made a good start.

**Bob.Razowsky** · August 31st, 2005, 10:16 AM

**Bob.Razowsky** · August 31st, 2005, 01:51 PM

**Bob.Razowsky** · September 2nd, 2005, 09:47 AM

sketch
"Dream of the puppet, be human."

working on

**Bob.Razowsky** · September 12th, 2005, 10:56 AM

working sooooooooo slowly

**GunTrouver** · September 12th, 2005, 01:56 PM

Good start, but you should try to work more precisely and to add more shadings with softer gradations.
Keep on workin'

**Bob.Razowsky** · October 1st, 2005, 03:23 PM

" The dream of the puppet, be human "

**Bob.Razowsky** · October 22nd, 2005, 12:14 PM

**Jtoons** · October 22nd, 2005, 12:29 PM

good job so far, it seems to me that you might be pushing too hard on your pencil and are getting stuck with those thick lines, therefore the gradiation is somewhat lost. in the pic with the cowboy with the gum and the cross it seems the guy's pants jump from light to dark, without much transition. aside form that, just keep going, you'll only improve. cheers.

**Bob.Razowsky** · October 22nd, 2005, 01:51 PM

it seems to me that you might be pushing too hard on your pencil and are getting stuck with those thick lines

i tryed to have a real dark shadow but even with a very dark pencil i can t... so i think i have to try shading lightly as you suggest thanks for that ^^

if i found time i ll try to do something like that

**Jtoons** · October 22nd, 2005, 01:59 PM

no problem man, glad i could be of some sort of help. i'll check in here often. just keep drawing man. cheers.

**P E N Ricklund** · October 26th, 2005, 10:56 AM

Hi! Thanks for leaving a line in my sb

You are doing great. Just work hard, every wake hour... not exactly every one, but most of them

I would suggest you stayed away from psp until you feel secure enough on you line work.
Good luck.

Hugs!

**Bob.Razowsky** · October 28th, 2005, 11:53 AM

I would suggest you stayed away from psp until you feel secure enough on you line work.

Lol! yea you r right, just a try to know how does it looks drawing on psp, but i seriously prefer my pen&paper ^^

sorry, i ve nothing to put there this week, too much work evryday and i m so tired...

kiss, bis bald