Amateur needing Proportion and Redlining help please?

[Cetcetra]

Hello, complete amateur here and was wondering if someone could list the reasons why this isn't looking correct or could red line the correct proportions? The skirt is bothering It is a commission of http:/fav.me/d5mh28z



Thank you in advance,

[Frida Bergholtz]

I'm a bit confused about what you mean with correct proportions. Her head is the size of a small moon so you can't mean realistic proportions?
What were you aiming for when you drew it? Right now it looks like it was supposed to be a chibi style drawing but then you drew an almost normal looking body.

[Cetcetra]

That's true, sorry about the confusion. It is in chibi style, but the legs, for example, aren't correct with regards to the box she is sitting on. Also I feel her posture is off. And where do her hands go?

Thank you for the reply

[Psychotime]

If you know this already, then you can fix those specific issues yourself.

[Elwell]

It is in chibi style, but the legs, for example, aren't correct with regards to the box she is sitting on. Also I feel her posture is off. And where do her hands go?

It's more of a perspective problem than a proportion problem. Fix the box, and the figure questions will answer themselves.