a lot of mistakes .... you better have enough time

[SadMonster]

I know there's a lot of mistakes in this artwork .... I don't know them but I know there's something wrong .. so please if you spot any of them just tell me
for now ignore the sketchy look ..... I already know this one

good luck .... you will need it

[Star Eater]

Big improvement over the first pictures you submitted here, which I still remember. It's clear you have been studying.
Post more.

Good to see you on the forums.

[sone_one]

I know there's a lot of mistakes in this artwork .... I don't know them but I know there's something wrong ..
for now ignore the sketchy look ..... I already know this one

good luck .... you will need it

wtf? aint you the one, thats ment to be spending time and effort?

[SadMonster]

Big improvement over the first pictures you submitted here, which I still remember. It's clear you have been studying.
Post more.

Good to see you on the forums.

and I still remember your comments .. happy to see you again
yes I did some study but not enough. I got a job as a programmer and since then struggling with time :@ ...

[SadMonster]

wtf? aint you the one, thats ment to be spending time and effort?

haha yea sure .. and I will ... but writing a critique can be called "time and effort" too ...
I'm just trying to encourage viewers

[Leonor]

This looks like a sad version of the "portrait of dad" in another thread. Strangeness.

The most blatant mistake is the ear. Placement, tilt and detail all need work.

[SadMonster]

This looks like a sad version of the "portrait of dad" in another thread. Strangeness.

The most blatant mistake is the ear. Placement, tilt and detail all need work.

hmm this is a coincidence for sure .. and I completely agree with your comment about the ears but can you tell me more about the details you mean