TinyBird's sketches - only critiques please, no compliments

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There's this " draw 30 Monster Girls" list thing going around in Tumblr, so I decided to do some myself since I'm not really inspired to do other stuff.

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[xneo]

i love your style!

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[untier]

Crane flies inside my apartment noooooo
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Confession...

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Confession...

...What does that have to do with anything? I don't get it.

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Yeah I'm not very varied writer. Also oh man my knee feels like it's going to fall apart.

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Yeaaaah it was kinda interesting. I did draw a lot more back then though (well… draw traditionally at least). And there were no “I’ve gotten worse” images at least.

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Fanart

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Fanart of Jason. No, not that Jason. In space. No, not THAT one!!
This one!

Jeez.

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Jeez, I think we wear the same type of shoes too. I don’t know whether it’s worse that I dress like a deranged serial killer or that I dress like an 80’s deranged serial killer.
Continuing watching Friday the 13th movies…
Six out of twelve watched.

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Little study of a screencap.

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Been messing with this on and off, I have lots of problems with "seeing" my thumbnails finished (as in something may look good as a thumbnail but I can't then keep that same quality in the actual image) and I tend to unconsciously cheat on things, making them more simple than I should (like avoiding perspective) so try to use this as a way to come up with better images, meaning that seeing something more finished makes it easier to figure out how the image actually works and to what extent my skills can carry the thumb.
The previous post had some revisited thumbs that I'll start working on.


Argh, totally fantarding these movies now, I still have three movies to go and I have to get these images out of my system.
Also these movies have surprisingly nice soundtrack songs. I mean, they have Pseudo Echo's song:

[kevin_]

great style! really like the water color looking ones, not sure if its actually water color or digital but still great! keep it up!

[Whirly]

I love the doggie illustrations!! You seem to be working like crazy!

[TinyBird]

great style! really like the water color looking ones, not sure if its actually water color or digital but still great! keep it up!

Not sure which you mean (the dogs?) but in my sketchbook if it looks like watercolour, it's most likely watercolour, I'm completely hopeless trying to mimic traditional stuff with digital.

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That one line of dialog and the virtual reality scene basically re-cap this whole movie series.
Nine and a half (the 9th movie... I just... I just can't.) out of twelve watched.

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Friday the 13th: Jason Takes Manhattan in a nutshell.
This movie features probably the most of scenes with Jason looking kinda confused. Including this specific scene.

[Lightship69]

Hi there matey

I love the updates, but the dead shrew was a little sad!! your heart isn't a small dead thing it is a great powerhouse of emotion and drive and I am in awe of its power and majesty!!
just think I can say all the crap and not blush! cool eh! and I'm not even drinking yet either.

LOL stay well and all the best to you my mate as usual!

[ChimeraDeimos]

Holy shit dude. Your art. I jizzed everywhere.

[Star Eater]

Friday the 13th: Jason Takes Manhattan in a nutshell.
This movie features probably the most of scenes with Jason looking kinda confused. Including this specific scene.

Probably because the actual small city parts don't even
take place in Manhattan.

[TinyBird]

Probably because the actual small city parts don't even
take place in Manhattan.

Yeah,I really would have wanted to see what they had done if they had had the budget to actually shoot most of the film in there like they originally suspected.
There were some tidbits about that in Wiki and well...
(Actually I swear the "Manhattan" parts starts to make more sense if you think that Jason really is totally lost and wants to catch the protagonists so that they can take him back home. What other reason does he have to chase only those two?)