"Pay for your sins" Environment

[Xcarbon]

i was watching alot of Feng Zhu's vids and it got me in the mood to do something so this is what i could put together from the random chaos!!
safe to say this my second time trying to do an environment..... not really that good

[Hitsu//San]

Uhm... what is it?

[j.s. sabastian]

i like the digi texture. and the dark to light gradient. but....yeah what is it? good work though feng is really good. hard to mimic

[Xcarbon]

a place where you come to pay for your sins and its not pretty!!
its like a boss stage.
lights that go far of are like stairs and the top most part is the boss area!!
its not pro...just imagination!

[Hitsu//San]

Ok but this is just a bunch of light probably on a surface. There's no human scale and nothing that can be compared to reality, in short this piece is floating nowhere without purpose in a viewers mind. It's ok if is just you having fun with brushes but is really bad if this thing is supposed to reach a possible viewer. You understand what i'm talking about?

[keirawinsor]

What medium did you use for this? I like the effect of the intensifying grays! The title also suits the artwork. Good job man!

[CatmanFS]

What is the disc supposed to be? Like an alter flush with the ground. I defiantly see the walkway, but I bet most people won't. Try to add a few more details that ensure that the viewer can tell what's happening.

[Xcarbon]

@ keirawinsor - i used photoshop .. thanks
@ CatmanFS - yea you're right thanks!!