Tchuk: The best part of you piece, I think, are the two glowing tentacles. They read well, are clear and give her the most distinct feature.
Overall however, I think she doesn't read too well. There is a lot going on - obviouly an octopus already has a lot going on, 8 legs and all. So putting a humanoid torso ontop of that, with two extra arms, jewelry and a busy mask - maybe a difficult thing to attempt.
I'm not sure if the glowing tentacles are supposed to be part of her or some holograms. But graphically, they do read well so in terms of design, I think they are her best features.
What do you think?