New concept model sheet. Whatcha think

[JudgementPanda]

Just wanted to post a model sheet I finished. What yall think about it.
Alright also re-sizing it due to a suggestion so I can post on here.

[Star Eater]

Apart from being on an outside link, the image is absolutely massive.

If you resize it and use the attachment manager to upload it into
your thread, it will encourage people to help you more.

Thanks.

[JudgementPanda]

Alright this might be a little better.

[Artfix]

Hey,

It looks like your painting on the right is what you wanted to give a finished look to. I would say that it needs to be even better rendered. It looks rushed and unfinished. I think the looseness of the rest is ok for concepts, but then you need one image that is nice and refined.

Also, you need to separate his forms a little more. I have a very hard time seeing his arm that is in front of him. I don't know if you want to use lines to do that or not. If not, consider putting his torso in shadow and his arm in the light, etc.

[JeffX99]

Agree with Artfix...my comment is not too bad...but feels overworked/overpresented. That said, it gets his character across and is probably low-level professional quality. I'm trying to say if you reversed the formula, giving the character as much attention as the presenatation, it could be a pretty strong piece. Not sure that makes a lot of sense but just my initial read.

[JudgementPanda]

Thanks everyone I appreciate the comments.