This is very nice sketchbook.

I really dig the motion and gesture you captured of the lady in post 111, and the emotion of the boy's face in 118. Keep working hard, you are improving.
If I may, I'd offer two suggestions, one of which was told me a couple weeks ago. The first is to add tone to your background. This will help set off the still life objects and contrast them with their surroundings. The other is to vary the thickness of your lines. The lines will be thinner, lighter or altogether gone in the highlight, and darker, thicker, or merged with the reflective or core shadows in the shade. While the shading is great on the bottle of glue and yeast extract, they seem to be flattened by the hard and heavy outline.
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