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    first comment in like 6 months , cool. Thanks alot! Youre right about that i should do a complete piece using all of my skills, that would show me where do i stand in overall skill level. Right now im working on a matte painting. And it has a lot of potential imho. Will keep you posted on that.
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    Good work! You certainly have talent.

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    as promised, the matte painting im working on...made an u turn as it was very photomanipulation-heavy...now its more painterly....
    its not finished, as im going to add a broken wall to the right bottom corner...moving diagonally down as it helps with the composition....and something here and there as i go along....
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    Nice work man, really like these studies. Especially that torso. Been trying to learn to blend like that and its frikken hard!

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    thanks Ken! ! I never got to finish the matte...right now started to paint a dragon...its about 2 hours in...will update on progress
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    update on the dragon
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    Update on the dragon
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    Dragon update, if some of you find any problems, let me know, i want to completely finish this
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    Took one of my old designs...and created a couple of new designs out of it
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    I really like your stuff!


    How do you do this smooth shading? What kind Brush do you use?

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    Hi! thanks! Its Smudge tool!, At some point i liked it like crazy, but i've dropped it now since it takes away the playfulness and flexibility.
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    Wow, Sa oled tasemel.

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    catukas, tänud heade sõnade eest!
    Ive been practicing drawing heads in a span of 2-3 weeks, i have loads of Loomis studies under my desk...heres a few paintings from a couple of days ago, these are not human but still...
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    yo! see viimane punane tüüp on päris hea see on valmis või WIP?
    Võib-olla aitaks naha niiskele/limasele tekstuurile kaasa kõrgläike indikeerimine (peaaegu nagu paremal silmal) ja varjud kaela peal heledamaks/punakamaks?

    kuidas muidu?

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    excellent studies... rockin work overall... I realize the alien heads are just studies, but I'm wondering what attention could be paid to the backgrounds to make the colors and details of the heads "pop" out even more?? just nitpickin suggestion... lol...
    keep it up!!!
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    Somelar - Hei! Vaikselt läheb, õppisin küljendamise ära suvega, nö valmistasin sügiseks ette ennast juba, niipalju kui jõuan joonistan ja muud miskit. Mis puutub sellesse punasesse tulnukasse siis ta kaldub rohkem WIPI poole, ma pole veel ta silmadega rahul, need on kuidagi liiga võõrad, ei tundu loomulikud. Lima tegin sihilikult ainult kõrvadest tulevatele kombitsatele

    JoshDArtist - Thanks for the kind words! To make the heads POP could use a simple texture and some suggestion of lighting i suppose.

    something new i've been working on...
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    Worked on foliage, and depth and some surface reflection
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    I like your sketchbook especially the redesigns of wolverine
    I am searching for a "Mentor" who will give me some hint's and an ass-kick when I get lazy

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    Thanks!

    An update on the underwater piece, and some thumbnail sketch i did
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    More thumbnail sketches, trying to work on my overall composition
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    Nice work, the dragon on this page looks awesome, and I really loved the pencils you put up on the last page as well, keep it up.

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    Thanks, psychobuddy!
    Heres the final product of the underwater concept i have been working on...ditched the whole diver idea and took a new direction....
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    realized that composition can be better, and so i added some elements and details
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    environment practice
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    a couple of overpaints of the previous environment
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    did a quick character sketch, a gardner zombie infected with some plant thats growing inside him
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    Started a second competition piece yesterday, working on it after hours...its about 4 hours in...if anybody notices something that is off, please make a note of it, thanks
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    Yo!
    Vaatasin, et oled võistlusel uue töö lisanud.
    Vetis crit'i kah. -Ma ei oska täpselt öelda, millest see tuleb, aga sa kasutad liiga palju musta või siis väga sügavaid toone värvidest. Kui tegemist on naturaalse valgusega nagu nt päike, siis pmst mitte kunagi ei ole looduses musta. Nt viimane pilt. Kivide tekstuuri ei anna mitte miski välja. See on suht sama taeva, vee ja poisiga. Kõige tagumine paberlaev hakkab juba õigemaks minema (see tumedus võib tegelt tulla ka monitorist. nt mul on kodune monitor töiesti peetis sügavate ja kõrgemate toonidega. vahepealne on ok. vahel ma ei saa lihtsalt aru, mis tooni ma kasutan. Kontoris on tiptop monitor. dell ultrasharp. peaks endale ka sama soetama).

    Kompad on ka pisut raskevõitu. Jäta rohkem "õhku" sisse. Vasak kaljurahn ei õigusta ennast. See on seal pigem petekaks, et sul ei olnud midagi sinna asemele panna. Ja kuna see rahn on nii suur, siis jääb selle tekstuuri puudumine ja liiga tumedad toonid väga silma. Ja perspektiivis on ka erroreid, mis tulevad ilmselt kompast. vice versa.
    Kasuta täiega palju referentsi. Viimase pildi jaoks otsi päikeseloojangut, vee pekslemist vastu kaljuseinu, rannakivide tekstuure ja uuri nende vorme, inimesi päikeseloojangu stseenis, päikeseloojangu aegset dramaatilist taevast jne jne... Selline eeltöö on täiega vajalik.

    Ja siluettide negatiivsed vormid on kompa mõttes mõneti olulisemad, kui positiivsed vormid. Inimene loeb siluette ja vorme kõige esimesena. Seega on pilti esmapilgul vaaadates silmal ja mõistusel kergem aru saada, mis värk seal käimas on.

    See vahepealne roheline koobas hakkab juba looma.
    vaata seda tüüpi, kompa loogika ja teema täiega sarnane sinu koopale. seal on päris hästi näha vormide defineerimist. Saad aru, kui suur see koobas on, kus see asub ja kust pilt võetd on jne.
    http://unidcolor.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3kfmjd

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    Yo!
    Viimaks sain midagi juurde vorpida jah...koolis on hetkel ainult fontide vorpimine ja raamatu küljendamine ja varsti semestri lõpp ja eksamid. Ma arvan see must värv tuleb pigem jah su monitorist, kogu palett on foto pealt, kohati suht tumedad toonid aga musta ei ole. Võistlusel pole otseselt lubatud tekstuure panna ja neid maalima ma ei hakanud, piirdusin suurema tõmbega. Kompa suhtes, see kaljurahn oli jäänudk, mille ma lõpuks croppisin ära, kuna töö nagu arenes teises suunas kui ma alguses plaanisin, ja sellele raskele tundele lisab juba palett palju juurde. Perspektiivi erroritest ma ei saa täpselt aru, mis sa silmas pead...minu mõõtmiste järgi peaks nagu enamvähem olema, 1punkti perkspektiivi kasutasin - otse päikese all olev horisondi punkt on keskpunktiks, kalju on suht kama kuidas see täpselt võrgustikku sobitub, kuna tegu on loodusliku vormiga, poisi vari tuleb sealt punktist välja ja läheb kaldu kuna poiss kummardab ette, vb peaks see pikem olema, kuna päike on suht horisondil... :/, niiet ma ei tea. Kivide referentsi oleks võinud rohkem kasutada..aga kuna see suur kalju jäi välja siis väga hullu ei ole...
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    eip, ma räägin nendest tumedatest toonidest, mida sa üsna sageli kasutad. asi pole ainult minu monitoris asi võib olla ka sinu monitoris. ma tõn näite, et minu kodune monitor ei tee madalatel ja kõrgetel toonidel vahet. sul võib sma olla. vaatan su töid praegu kontoris ja suht sama laks.. liiga palju tumedat domineerib ja vormid ei ole perspektiivi loogika suhtes defineeritud. see siis perspektiivi kohta.
    aga jah.. soovitaks vb kasutada rohkem erksamaid värve, mitte nii palju tumedat. sama asi ka zombie ja muu sellisega. lihtsalt vormist ei ole aru saada. see on ka suur issue.
    võta reference ette ja harjuta vorme. praegu on kuidagi flat ja tume kogu see värk. et jah. soovitaks neid asju veel vuntsida.

    a postita mõni oma font ka üles. tahaks su kooli stuffi ka näha.

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