IDW #203 : One Shot Laser Dueling Pistol - VOTING!

[Pixie Trick]

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IDW # 203 Topic: One Shot Laser Dueling Pistol
Deadline for voting: Sunday, May 20

No voting for your own entries! I repeat, no voting for your own entries

Give critiques and comments, we're all here to learn from each other!

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Original thread:http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=241532

[MCL!on]

Here is my entry for this IDW...

[DPFX]

Set phaser to "Satisfy".

[electricbill]

Here's my entry.

[zelda_geek]

Here's my entry:

[julianR]

1 shot laser dueling pistol

[Shmaba]

I was pretty busy today with it being Mother's Day (excuses, excuses...) and this is still rougher than I'd like it to be but here it is anyway. Hopefully I'm not late on the submission time.

[SnailsPace]

Sorry I couldn't compete this time, had a caricature gig all week. Wanted to give some crits though. Nothing to specific, I think technically everyone did a good job, I think a couple entries look unfinished, but thats not a huge deal.

My biggest crit applies to everyone though, I don't think anyone really conveyed the "one shot dueling" aspect of this very well. I'm really surprised no one made a dueling kit like the ones they actually used to have. These seem to just come across as laser pistols, more than something intended to duel with.

Hope that gives some perspective!