Critiques plz. Need help.

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Mediums I used: Prismacolor Pencils, Crayola markers, Copic markers, Micron Black Pen, Crayola crayons.

This is first time I actually tried to make my self portrait(sort of) with traditional tools.

I want to know if I have to fix anything or have any problems with the artwork.

Thanks!