Last minute input on art school portfolio?

[Paper.Trains]

EDIT: Its been sent off. Haha sorry for the useless thred

So portfolios for art school are due in the next couple days and I was just hoping I could get some last minute input.
I'm going for Illustration. Are there any pieces that you feel aren't as strong and should be left out?

For instance; The watercolor one I think is a little messy and not too well done. There are multiple problems with it, I'm quite aware... but maybe it shows an attempt at something new, or at least some form of creativity? And I personally am quite fond of the four-paneled drawing with the little people and the drawing of the ribbon going out the window, but I'm not sure if those are something that art schools care to see.

Finally, the order. Im at a loss. Suggestions on that would be grand!

Comments, input, suggestions are all appreciated.

Thanks ever so much, this forum has been a huge help!

ps. there's hopefully another painting I should be able to add to this by the end of the day, with any luck. If that affects anything at all.