These are the first five pages from a personal comic I've been working on. I did them around last September along with starting the next few pages, but then I decided I'm not quite happy with how I've been rendering them, so I'm going to start over.
So, any thoughts on any aspect of any of these pages would be very much appreciated!
(One thing I already know is the chain on the bike in the second page is on the wrong side... whoops.)