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    Have what it takes.

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    The surfaces are all too similar. Leather, wood, metal, cloth, flesh all rendered the same way. Try to get the surface quality of the materials into all that visual variety.

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    TAD class: Composition and Color 2

    For final I am doing the assignment called Dream Tellers. Yet I am having a hard time picking out the what give a piece more whimsical feel. Need help.
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    For the last one, I think it's great. Yet i dont know how t help your because i have no clue whats it's trying to say. Keep working. (:

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    In terms of correction.

    I still feel that my composition is still a bit stiff yet and non-active.
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    Dream teller update.

    Here is what i have so far for corrections.
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