[ Dyspho ] - Terraformer - Up p1

**Dysphory** · February 21st, 2010, 12:21 AM

Hi there !

This morning in the shower I though : " I spent too much time outside creative community, it's time to make it changed ! "

So here I am

I decided to submit my work here, defenseless to your critics and comments

I'll start with that environment did a few month ago...

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**Jockemon** · February 21st, 2010, 12:50 PM

Cool! I dig your painting!
But you should give the character some color or maybe erase him... Even with out him you can still read that the gate is massive. And try the Filter > Sharpen > Unsharp Mask this will make your painting look... well sharper... its a bit to soft right now for my taste hehe.
Anyway keep up the good work hope to see an update soon!

**Dysphory** · February 24th, 2010, 12:56 AM

Jockemon» thanks for your comment !
you are totally right for the character....actually I did it without any conviction.
It would be better to erase it !

hop, another one

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**angelo cordon** · February 24th, 2010, 01:22 AM

wow, this is cool! How did this piece start off?? Did you use any pictures for the grass and mountains?? Really curious.

**Dysphory** · February 25th, 2010, 07:05 PM

angelo» Thanx for your comment !

I started the piece with that rough :

And unfortunately I didn't used any photos, it would have saved me time but at this moment I couldn't find what I was looking for...so I just weaponed my-self with patience, a cup of tea and my favorite brush pack for that ^^

Here is the rough I used for the previous one as well:

**Cyberman** · February 25th, 2010, 07:36 PM

I love the first two! Cheers

**Donna** · February 25th, 2010, 07:40 PM

Wow, great environments! I love the one with the gate, beautiful design. The second one looks a little too polished for my taste (the, er, UFO/electricity things I mean). Mountain in the background is wonderful, though!