TSIB-I would really appreaciate to know what YOU think ;)

[hijack]

hi! this is the last illustration I ve done and I would really appreciate to know what you think. I had some problems with the explosion and the building, if you have any advice for me...
thank you

[dpaint]

Cool idea! the foreshortening of the main character is quite a bit off making him look like he is standing on the pencil sticking out of the zombie head in the right foreground. The zombies that are being consumed by the fireball should not be black silohuettes. The intense light would make them a midtone green at the very darkest.

[Vanox]

Great work, nice colors, i love the composition and the light. maybe the feet must be a little bit smaller, it look like its bigger than the head of the zombie. I think you did a really good job!

[Thujon]

Completely agree with DPaint... I think that the "flying" zombies are a bit too small.... it makes the perspective look a bit odd... hope this helps!

[hijack]

omg , i didn t even realise how the «flying zombies» were really to small compare to the building next to them :s Thanks for the comment...I might try to work on the feet too, but for now, i really dont see how i can arrange this..I think if i rotate the pencil it will still looks like if the character is standind on the pencil..maybe by making the pencil smaller?
It s gonna be a real puzzle to make this in photoshop because of the way i ve done my layers lol ! but I'll try.
Also if someone knows a good way to do a smoke effect for the explosion in background it would be great, I've tryied to do a good brush or two for it, but all I finally used was brushes done from galaxies pictures I have found on google...

[dpaint]

Volcano eruptions make good reference for big explosions