Acceptable color scheme?

[mahriai]

This piece has an enormous amount of mistakes, but no matter. I've spent too much time on it to let it go completely to waste. So, last night I devised a color scheme. Is it acceptable, or does it need tweaking? I'm not so sure about the center figure, but the schemes of the other two are nice, in my mind.

Placement of figures is HORRIBLE. But oh, well. I was just working with character design, so whatever.

Also, if anyone would like to critique the lineart, I'd be happy to 'listen'.

I'd like to get the colors down before I actually start coloring the piece with markers. Because once I start, there's no turning back.

Thanks so much for your time, it's really appreciated.