Aliens Attack

**rboyle** · June 2nd, 2009, 01:07 PM

Hey everyone, here is an illustration I've been working on recently... Aliens Attack! It's actually a remake of an older illustration you can see here. Looking for some feedback and critiques.

Thanks

-Ryan

**hala** · June 2nd, 2009, 02:54 PM

I think your use of texture has improved a lot, however I think the image is static and has no emotion. If you changed the viewing point of the piece, as well as the location of the horizon line, it could have much more...oomph! if you know what i mean; a lot more power to the piece.

I do think it has a lovely style to it, and good choice of colors

**rboyle** · June 2nd, 2009, 03:05 PM

Great, thanks for the feedback hala.

**GrayMind** · June 3rd, 2009, 01:06 AM

Mix up the robots in the background more to add some veriety... all of their legs should be in a different position, at least. And perhaps the background laser could be at a different angle. Love the style and coloring, though. Has an awesome feel and overall... er.. vibe.

**rboyle** · June 3rd, 2009, 12:44 PM

Thanks GrayMind, I definitely agree with you there. I'm reworking the image now...

**Gautham** · June 5th, 2009, 05:12 PM

Hi there...Nice style..But i feel there is too much of empty space on the left side of the illustration..Perhaps you could something over there.buildings faded away into the background,more robots(perhaps moving to the direction of the main one)..but keep it subdued so that it doesn't grab too much attention..And i agree with GrayMind..Add more variation..It will make it more interesting...

**williams73** · June 5th, 2009, 07:51 PM

Like it its a fun illustration but for some reason the depth of field seems off to me
the robot seem ahead of the laser could be a scale thing or could be the lack of foreground reference, anyways thats my two cents