My student short

[feawen]

Hi all!
I'm a newb here XD
I'd like to show you my student short I did last year. I would love animation critiques cuz I am now concentrating on animation since I am a 3D animator.
Thx

[egerie]

Tiens, tiens... Cepep du vieux!
I loved the story it wasn't too long nor the shots too heavy. In terms of animation, there isn't much to say, besides perhaps that some shots need more anticipation for readability and follow through for fluidity.
Thanks for the giggle and keep animating!

[feawen]

Thx!
It's true for the anticipation... that's something I forget to do lol. I have to pay more attention to this. thanks

And yeah cegep du vieux! XD

[Ninjerina]

I thought it was a nice touch with the chameleon blending into the static of the television. What animation school are you attending?

[feawen]

Thx Ninjerina!
I went to Cégep du Vieux Montréal in Montréal, Québec. It's a new program I did, I was in the second batch.

[M Jin]

lovely~