Harlequin 01's Sketchbook

**Harlequin01** · April 16th, 2008, 04:34 AM

I finally am posting again. I look forward to everyone's criticisms. I dearly need them.

**Harlequin01** · April 16th, 2008, 04:36 AM

This is a version of the beast from "Beauty and The Beast".

**hedwordup** · April 16th, 2008, 05:46 AM

i like thae face and the legs, i know its imaginary but i dont think the hands (or paws) work very well. like your line style and the horns are great. actually its just the hand on the floor i dont like the other one looks fine

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho....php?p=1726510

**Harlequin01** · April 17th, 2008, 10:05 PM

hedwordup: I reworked the entire sketch....ok a new scketch completely, but I tried to spend a little extra time with the hands/paws to get them right. I hope I hit the mark.

**Harlequin01** · April 18th, 2008, 07:08 AM

**Harlequin01** · April 21st, 2008, 06:53 AM

Well, I screwed this one up. I didn't read the part about the expressions needed and I've run out of time. Oh well. I wanted everyone to see my finished piece anyway. I'd love some feedback. If you can go to my sketchbook and share your criticism with me, I would be appreciative.

**Harlequin01** · April 21st, 2008, 06:31 PM

**hedwordup** · April 28th, 2008, 08:21 AM

nice to see you working on the beast it looks better. your characters are good and i like your style. i think your figure work could be improved tho

**hedwordup** · April 28th, 2008, 08:22 AM

by the way im going to sunderland uni thanks for your comments on my sb i found them very helpful

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=120987