raise yo hands.....

[WingManMedia]

bout an hour.... just finished it and was dying to get some crits... the face is crazy for sure... but what do you guys think?

thanks!

[Tomato]

i can't see the pic i'm afraid...

[WingManMedia]

damnit.. its my host. lemme fix it real fast.

[Tomato]

not bad, but i think you need some more shades and tones on his body to define it slightly more. add some darker shadow under his arm and maybe around his stomach

[koroshiya001]

I dont know about finished work, but it is pretty good. The chest is pretty much the same all over, even though hes raising his arm on one side. It should probably stretch or something.

[Kvick]

Yeah this looks sorta, in progress you could touch it up a lot, the body parts aren't very distinguishable from one another and it looks all blended together. Face and neck look pretty good though and all of the proportions work though, and overall its pretty good, spend a little more than an hour on it though so it looks more finished

[WingManMedia]

and the revision.... improvement?

[figure of frgt10]

heh, youre missing a slash in the closing of that tag
your pallette is nice, but i thinkyou need some more contrast to really bring out things.