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    comic color artist looking for input

    Hey everyone, I'm new to this forum but i thought that I would start with a post of a Jim Lee Batman cover that I am practicing on. If anyone had any thoughts I would appreciate them....


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    Very nice!

    I like the overall mood, except tat I would say give the lightning a little more detail. The bat on his chest looks a TIDbit awkward, but nothing much.

    Correct me if I am wrong(because I sucka t this kind of observation) but, shouldn't some of the lightning change due to the lightning bolt? Just asking.

    Everything else looks nice to me.
    Beware!!!!
    Sketchbook!

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    Thumbs down Meh.

    The costume looks splotchy...REAL splotchy.
    Too high of highlight value, and too inconsistent of light source highlighting.

    The "lightning" looks like giant, smeary ropes.
    The photoshop-clouds sky doesn't help.

    ~M

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    Wayyyyyyyyyy too much default airbrushing.

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    He's depressed at how badly he's been colored...

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