Warlord's Offspring

[FlipMcgee]

[Zwalharulzuki]

pretty good. there are some serious issues with the young man's anatomy, however. His head is too small and too far to the right (his left). It's also does not look as though it is placed far enough up, like it's protruding from just the upper part of his pectoral muscles.

Also, the arm on the left (his right) is very wonky. The hand does not seem appropriately sized, either. You need to rework almost all of his proportions, it seems.

The other figures are much better. The girl, the child and the dog are nicely rendered and stylish.

[FlipMcgee]

Thanks for the crit Zwal. Your observations are spot on.

With this piece I'm trying to be a bit experimental with the figure in the forefront. To make him....larger than life (heroic) I took the risk of exagerrating his side closer to the viewer and gave it a forced perspective feel. True, with the other near realistic figures the alpha male looks totally out of place.

Glad you like the dog. It was a challenge to make it look believable.