she gets wet

[rapxic]

this is one of my first digi paintings on my own lines , been a lurker here for sometime , i'm willing to make this one get accepted into the finished threads. the concept of it , was to have just sum alien girl with glowing x's on the breast. i'm not so good at concept but i'm trying , i just hope after i finish this that it will actually make sense , like why does she have this and that and such . Anyways i hope you help me through and point out stuff as i update , thanks








updated a bit more

[arttorney]

So far so good I think. People will comment more if you can build it up some more.

[Apollonian]

Right now it's hard to tell where you're going with this one. What i can tell you is that the nipples are too high. Also, regarding the cylinder around her head - Try again. What you have so far is good otherwise.

[rapxic]

thanks alot guys, soeey about the long delay, i was'nt feeling really like myself these past 2 weeks but i'll do the corrections and also that cylinder will be removed and the mech arm probaly

[Quigleyer]

break down the head geometrically. The light goes too far over on his chin, or not far enough over on his face. Right now it looks as though you intended for the light source to be somewhere beside or right behind him up above him, but then his nose isn't highlighted and his chin is. If you break it down into... say three planes at the beginning and continually break it down then you'll have a believable light source.

[rapxic]

break down the head geometrically. The light goes too far over on his chin, or not far enough over on his face. Right now it looks as though you intended for the light source to be somewhere beside or right behind him up above him, but then his nose isn't highlighted and his chin is. If you break it down into... say three planes at the beginning and continually break it down then you'll have a believable light source.

thanks man , sorry i didnt see this earlier but i'll add those hints

[6ideon]

I like where this is going, really weird.