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    Can I Make this better?

    It's just a sketch leading to a finished drawing, but I want to catch problems before I can finish the china dude, supposedly the wizard like thing....

    Have you got any idears?

    many many many Thnax!!!,


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    Is he supposed to be a dwarf/midget? because if he's not, you've got some serious proportion issues.

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    Hmmm... Point taken.. and Indeed his head is to big .. Hmz..

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    It's not that the head is too big for the body, but rather that the body is too small for the head and hands. His lower legs and feet are too small for his body.

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    making correction (Redrawing) thanks again

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