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    Exclamation Promo page for Warrior Pic, with Video

    I'ts all put together!

    Completed the pic, promo site with "The Making Of" video all rolled into one.
    Take a peek:

    "ENDURE" with "The Making Of" video>>
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    the lighting on the helmet looks decent and it's nice that you have a theme and all.. but the composition and readability aren't doing it for me.

    the two figures are crammed into the center and that foreground arrow looks squashed in there without adding much depth to the pic. it would help if you brought the spirit guy up further to reveal more of the figure and make him more engaging. the shield looks like a rock that he's peaking under and i don't know if the puffy white things in the background are clouds or splashing water or what. i really suggest looking at some reference to pull off a more realistic rendering.

    overall, i think you should work more on your fundamentals (lighting, perspective, etc.) and spend less time with "making of" videos. you'll improve faster by producing more work and not getting too attached to any one piece. now keep working and make some more!
    Last edited by Basil; June 19th, 2007 at 12:47 AM.

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