here a piece called: assasin under the red moon which i just finished so please critique the hell out of it so i can improve my skills on digital painting.
your future dad
Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
here a piece called: assasin under the red moon which i just finished so please critique the hell out of it so i can improve my skills on digital painting.
Last edited by chillasX; June 9th, 2007 at 08:56 PM. Reason: forgat picture
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Level 15 Gladiator: Spartacus' Hoplomachi
You've got a weird thing going on where the texture on the moon and the ground is sharply in focus, while the person is a little blurry and out of focus.
It makes it difficult to know where you really want the viewer to look.
Think about what is most important and where you want the viewer to look and make that the area of sharpest focus.
Caffeine Monster
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Im Guessing that you have been using a soft brush for the person?
Instead of doing that grab a hard edged brush and paint with that, that makes your paintings sharper and better to look at.
Also the lighting that is on the man is not consistent with the lighting on the ground. Also i would like to know why is he standing in a tiny puddle?
Other than that i think it looks good, the anatomy isn't that bad and its a cool idea.
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